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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 446983 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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2103 of my comments have received 2152 Great Feedback votes

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 - it's that sudden beauty in

Posted on Thu, 23 Mar 2017

 - it's that sudden beauty in everything after a winter's bleakness isn't it - very well said Rhiannon!

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Posted in Awakening!

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The short sharp works really

Posted on Sun, 19 Mar 2017

The short sharp works really well, and I imagine it sounds very effective too.

When you miss someone and it's all you can write, is something I think many of us can identify with.

This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day...

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Posted in Mum's the word

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Always nice to read something

Posted on Fri, 03 Mar 2017

Always nice to read something with a happy ending! I like the detail in this story, and the narrative flows really well. If you're looking for feedback, there are some auto correct typos, and some places where I think you might have repeated the...

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Posted in The Fairy Ring

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A very thoughtful piece. I

Posted on Sun, 12 Feb 2017

A very thoughtful piece. I hope you get a lot of reads for this!

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Posted in You want to leave a legacy?

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this is a really good

Posted on Tue, 07 Feb 2017

this is a really good description - it feels just like that sometimes!

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Posted in On Trying to Write

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Some great imagery in this

Posted on Sat, 04 Feb 2017

Some great imagery in this prose (poem?). Welcome back!

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Posted in Half a Cup

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What a fascinating piece of

Posted on Tue, 10 Jan 2017

What a fascinating piece of life writing! I would love to hear more about those years of wandering. Any plans to write it up?

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Posted in (Not) Counting the Minutes at Falmouth Town Station

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agree with all the above -

Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017

agree with all the above - such beautiful and detailed images in this word picture!

One small typo : you have a rogue apostrophe in the first stanza

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Posted in Promises of Spring.

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I like it too!

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016

I like it too!

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Posted in Colour Blind

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I think this is a very

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2016

I think this is a very touching poem

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Posted in Silence

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