I wanna be your pen

Posted by Basket case on Sat, 28 Feb 2015

I wanna be your pen 
Recording your voice with beautiful words
Depicting your moods with perfect line 
Composing your stories with happier end
Lettering your name with fully love

I wanna be your pen 
Lying in your snug pocket 
Dozing with your broken heart 
But I am a man, living with loneliness  

I wanna be your pen 
Depicting your long hair with gentle glasses 
Delineating your warm hands with icy beer 
Painting your serious cheek with naïve smile 
Drawing your expressive eyes with deep love 

I wanna be your pen 
Rearrange we met at a right time 
Adapting your destiny into an amazing way 
But I am a man, drawing with hopelessness 

I wanna be your pen 
Delineating a moon in your dark night 
Drawing a kid in your sad past 
Depicting a dog in your lone time 
Painting a star in your black life 

I wanna be an eraser 
Wiping the wrinkle from your mature face
Erasing the frown from your miserable soul
But I am a man, drawing without an eraser  
 
I wanna be your pen, but you got a ring

Dec. 21, 2014

Comments

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Basket Case, I like the straightforward  immediacy of this.It's a good poem, would work well as Open Mic.

Submitted by Basket case on

yea, i would work well, just i am not very good at English, but it getting better 

anyway, i will keep working on it

Thanks, elsiesmiley

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Submitted by Philip Sidney on

I really like this basket, did you want it on the forum or under your writes though?

Submitted by Basket case on

Glad you like it, Philip

I would like put it on the forum, but yesterday, when I tried, it not allow me publish anything, I didnt know why, so, I just moved it to my blog. and today, I can publish again. interesting

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Submitted by Basket case on

Hey,Philip

I am new here, I am not really know much about the forum here

I just tried to put it on the regular site yesterday, but it not allowed me to do anything there, confused

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Submitted by Philip Sidney on

You can only put three things up in a day, so should be fine to put up again tomorrow. :)

 

Submitted by Basket case on

yea, I wrote too much yesterday, but I got it now:D

Thanks, Philip

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