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Posted by Juliet OC on January 30, 2006 - 19:55

I really enjoyed this story, its everydayness, and insight into the male psyche. It rang true, the dialogue very natural. I am sure a lot of people will relate to this.

http://www.abctales.com/node/548744

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Juliet OC | February 1, 2006 - 16:45

now it's got a cherry, well worth a read.

Juliet

2Lou | February 2, 2006 - 20:26

Really enjoyed it. No constructive criticism to give - thought it was excellent (ok, I did speed up over the football bits, but that's allowed).

gomarcgo@yahoo.com | February 7, 2006 - 19:05

cheers chaps