AMostDepressingExpectation/Foster

is this an edit? as i am sure i read this before - still excellent.

Juliet

Thanks Foster, a great read. I love the rhythm of "a faint tick turned all-out knock".

I find prose quite difficult to read on a screen but yours makes me read on.

lib

Thanks for the flag nobody, and for commenting Juliet and lib. I'm glad you liked this story.

Yes, it's a repost - but in many ways, rewritten.

foster.