White with a hint by margharita

Posted by tcook on August 29, 2007 - 16:11

Everything a short story should be: subtle, lots of 'show' and very little 'tell' and a beautifully relaxed writing style:

I concur. This has already been chosen for inclusion in the autumn edition of ABCtales Magazine. Coming soon!

Really liked this story. Thought it was going to end when she lay on the bed, but wasn't sorry that it carried on.

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