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Sleeping in the City of Lost Angels

Posted by Mortaza on November 25, 2007 - 01:36

Wrote this recently:
Looking about in the City of Lost Angels.
Cant find her anywhere at sight.
Laying my head down to rest.
Waiting patiently.
Wake me up when she comes.

What are your opinions of my writing?
Do you have any tips?

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patmac | November 25, 2007 - 13:35

I think the idea is to add stories and poems to your account. And people come and read them there.

My latest killing is:
http://www.bookscape.co.uk/short_stories/human_sacrifice.php