short story or not?

I'd split it up into 2000 word chunks, not because it's too long to be a short story, it isn't. On-line readers have short attention spans, it's not a brilliant experience reading on screen anyway.

Thanks for that Ewan, I'll probably do that, I agree about reading on screen, can't beat a book in the hands!
Shirley, :-)

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