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ADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD (a novel)

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Adventures In A Difficult World (chapter 3)

Submitted on March 5, 2008 - 00:36 | 290 reads

Adventures In A Difficult World (chapter 4 )

Submitted on March 5, 2008 - 00:30 | 288 reads

ADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD (Chapter 5)

Submitted on June 12, 2009 - 14:25 | 132 reads

ADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD (Chapter 6)

Submitted on June 12, 2009 - 14:12 | 103 reads

ADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD. ( chapter one)

Submitted on May 10, 2006 - 23:54 | 1155 reads

ADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD. (chapter two)

Submitted on May 10, 2006 - 23:40 | 900 reads

Comments

Juliet OC | February 10, 2007 - 11:31

Hi Chris, i have just read chapter 2 and though there are some great descriptions in in i found i lost my way as you pack far too much in. I feel the chapter lacks a focus as it begins with the narrator about to become a grass dealer and then veers off into a bar and his relationship with Astrid. There is probably two or three chapters material in here.

Juliet