California Diary 1 Submitted on August 8, 2006 - 16:02 | 768 reads
California Diary 10 Submitted on August 17, 2006 - 16:50 | 802 reads
California Diary 11 Submitted on August 18, 2006 - 16:11 | 738 reads
California Diary 2 Submitted on August 9, 2006 - 15:48 | 753 reads
California Diary 3 Submitted on August 10, 2006 - 14:43 | 790 reads
California Diary 4 Submitted on August 11, 2006 - 16:25 | 720 reads
California Diary 5 Submitted on August 12, 2006 - 16:59 | 774 reads
California Diary 6 Submitted on August 13, 2006 - 16:49 | 749 reads
California Diary 7 Submitted on August 14, 2006 - 18:18 | 742 reads
California Diary 8 Submitted on August 15, 2006 - 23:02 | 745 reads
California Diary 9 Submitted on August 16, 2006 - 22:30 | 778 reads
Comments
JohnnyBowman | August 11, 2006 - 07:14
Stream of consciousness has only worked for me if allusions connect with eachother. If Day 3 built upon the themes on day 2, although most stream of conscious literature is completely confusing in the beginning. It would be cool if the random details and images all connected in an overall theme or purpose.