life,
many people get cofused
and i seem to know them all
and i get messed up with them
and then it all goes wrong
purpose,
we all want one
it gives us a drive
motivation to do something new
until it all goes wrong
people,
there are some we like
and others we hate.
but still in this world
we make it all go wrong
love,
until it all goes wrong
Comments
sabzwin | August 19, 2009 - 22:42
<3
Nathan Bednarek | August 19, 2009 - 23:06
A lovely way to introduce yourself. Welcome to abctales!
This is a touching poem and an enjoyable read. One little typo- second verse; should be 'purpose'.
Other than that, this poem is good. Looking forward to more of your work.
Nathan.
ankari | August 23, 2009 - 17:40
i love the last two lines, says it all really
ankari x