my only regret
about
fucking
you is that
i was too drunk to
recall how
you look
naked.
i can picture you clothed
peel away the layers
but my imagination
could not possibly
do
justice
to your body
I only hope that you
don't spend as much time
thinking of me as I do of you.
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | January 22, 2012 - 18:31
Liked, alang:-)
kirincnj | January 22, 2012 - 19:20
the last stanza is perfect.
MistakenMagic | January 22, 2012 - 19:30
Some great imagery in the second stanza and I love the lack of punctuation - my only criticism would be the capitalised 'I's in the final stanza - the poem might flow better if you stick to one way of punctuating and keep a lack of capitalization throughout!
Magic x
hudsonmoon | January 22, 2012 - 20:15
Nice flow to this piece.
Rich
threeleafshamrock | January 23, 2012 - 11:42
I like it, worryingly deja vu(ish)- the seeds of a misspent youth. Must look up some more of your writing. Thanks and well done...
Chris ;)