Give me time and give me space,
so I can try to find a place
where no one else can hear me cry,
question me or wonder why
the things that happend went so wrong;
why I had to take so long.
Give me time and give me space,
I need to find a warm embrace
that doesn't bite me back this time,
no bitter taste of sour lime
or crafty secret hidden intentions,
I only need a bit of attention.
Give me time and give me space,
to lose myself; leave no trace
and start again, somewhere new,
a place where i can have a view
of all the world and people there,
but this time they won't stop and stare.
Give me time and give me space,
this time I won't fall from grace;
embarrass myself and cause a scene,
try to keep my reputation clean;
avoiding breaking up with you,
then you'll realise I love you too.

Comments
mfcostes | March 11, 2011 - 01:29
Expressing deep thoughts with measure and rhyme, the kind of poem I'd read at any space and time. :)
Embaress?
alexmufc1995 | March 11, 2011 - 07:07
Thanks, I don't normally write poetry so i decided to keep it strict in rhyme and rhythm. :)
Sorry about the spellings, its not good considering I have an English exam today too!
skinner_jennifer | March 11, 2011 - 16:58
Considering this is your first poem, I thought it
was brilliant, yes I really enjoyed reading it.
Jenny.
alexmufc1995 | March 11, 2011 - 21:00
Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it. I also wrote a second, called Tsunami, earlier today.