The butterfly effect

I like this clever little ditty, there are a couple of typos in the first line which distract a little,:~}

thankyou loads for pointing out the typos! too much of a hurry i'm afraid. i've put them right. cheers!

Lovely! & the reading times along perfectly. K

I agree, very clever use of words here and the flow is perfect. Liked a lot :)

Rachel xx

thanks you two for commenting. sorry it takes me a while to acknowledge things - i do this from work - plus - im not always aware someone has left a comment. v kind of you both tho xx

It's okay alice I totally understand - I've only just discovered the 'Track' button!

looking forward to reading more of your work,

Rachel xx

track button? could you give me the sort of directions to it you would if dealing with an idiot please.

It's just a little option that appears near your name when you go into your account, it keeps a track of everything you've posted and any comments they've recieved, as well as replies to any comments you've made on other people's work. I didn't even know it was there for a few weeks myself, but it does come in handy, hope this helps!

The idiot you refered to must be somebody you know, because we're all fully aware that with poetry like this, it certainly can't be you ;o) Just read this again and love it a little more, really is top-notch.

Rachel xx

thanks for taking the trouble rachel! i will go a-looking for that button right now. xx