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Posted by alice sunderland on May 10, 2010 - 10:54
from the ABC set blah blah

As time turns clarity more claret-y
I see my childhood in a rose-tinted haze
or this may be because
Consett just f###ing was
Rose-tinted in those days.

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lenchenelf | May 10, 2010 - 11:06

Enjoyed reading :-) small typo 'those' and I'd say restore the F word, it works in the context of your poem. atb Lena xx

insertponceyfre... | May 11, 2010 - 10:43

I agree with Lena about losing the asterisks - also enjoyed it!

alice sunderland | May 11, 2010 - 12:02

all good advice guys thanx. but - if i restore the f###ing f-word i wont be able to access the poem anymore! i use the computer at work and it wont work if a word comes up it doesnt like. however - its good to know that people here wouldnt faint if i did use it. thanx both of you xx.