My fine-spun self is shrouded;
Shielded from approaching storms,
By guilders shade now tainted;
Upon my gentle dancing form.
The dark-ground is my comfort,
Cupping my cavorting feet;
While drumming beats of my tender-heart,
Harks’ my strumming bobbing beat.
Innocence is the name upon my heart,
And my delicate ways are seen by all;
Enthroned are the souls’ who see me standing;
For my body given, is given whole.
I beckon out to all who notice,
I tap my beat to all whom fear;
I beg to reach those lost forgotten,
I long to make the listening hear...
For the children of Edlington.
Those who died and those whose souls were murdered.
Cpywrite 2010.

Comments
alphadog1 | September 12, 2010 - 12:46
Thanks for cherry picking this.
pinda | September 12, 2010 - 13:52
'Cupping my cavorting feet;
While drumming beats of my tender-heart,
Harks’ my strumming bobbing beat'
Loved those lines, you've got an amazing talent. Well done, this 100% deserved a cherry.
Pinda
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alphadog1 | September 12, 2010 - 13:54
yeah, I was crying at the time.
alphadog1 | September 12, 2010 - 13:55
yeah, I was crying when I wrote it... It is the best thing I have ever written... to date.
Highhat | September 12, 2010 - 14:59
the ryhme is good as well. Yes a beautiful little poem. Well done ;) well deserved cherry.
pia
alphadog1 | September 12, 2010 - 15:00
thanks Pia.
skinner_jennifer | September 13, 2010 - 10:23
Hi alphadog1,
You have a wonderful way of expressing words.
Well deserved cherry.
Jenny.
alphadog1 | September 13, 2010 - 10:26
Thanks Jenny