Bullet-freckled buildings and
Smoke.
One breath ago, she was a mother.
And he felt pain.
He no longer
Feels.
Look down from the screen to be spared the rest
but not the reflection on the glass coffee table.
Now pick a side, a stand
pick a soundtrack
And that concludes this evening's news -
good night.

Comments
Jacquelineann | July 18, 2010 - 15:01
I enjoyed this Amna very much, it is very clever, all in a few lines you have painted a really vivid picture.
Amna | July 19, 2010 - 20:17
Thank you for saying so, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Tom Brown | August 20, 2010 - 16:13
Motherless children have a hard time
Deepanker Saxena | February 25, 2011 - 11:40
short and impressive..good use of expressions i must say