Living Room Death

Bullet-freckled buildings and
Smoke.

One breath ago, she was a mother.

And he felt pain.

He no longer
Feels.

Look down from the screen to be spared the rest
but not the reflection on the glass coffee table.

Now pick a side, a stand
pick a soundtrack

And that concludes this evening's news -
good night.

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Comments

Jacquelineann | July 18, 2010 - 15:01

I enjoyed this Amna very much, it is very clever, all in a few lines you have painted a really vivid picture.

Amna | July 19, 2010 - 20:17

Thank you for saying so, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Tom Brown | August 20, 2010 - 16:13

Motherless children have a hard time

Deepanker Saxena | February 25, 2011 - 11:40

short and impressive..good use of expressions i must say