First kiss

The beautiful sapphire eyes,
Long sweeping locks,
Puts my heart in knots,
The slender figure,
The perfect face,
Makes my heart race,
I wonder closer,
Then her hair,
Sways slightly in the breeze,
Coming from outside,
Where a perfect,
Midnight blue sky,
Lays far above,
A short time later,
We are alone,
I pull her close,
And smell a sweet perfume,
We embrace then our lips touch,
Hers soft and tender,
A rush of happiness,
Beyond compare,
Only known by the passion we share.

By Andrew Evans

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Comments

Caolan_le_Paddy | July 15, 2008 - 16:55

Aww sweet xD

andrew-evans | July 17, 2008 - 10:51

plz leave comments

Fallen_Hero | July 21, 2008 - 19:25

Wow, your poem's lovely. And inspiring! Keep on writing, I like your style! :)
Ms. Louise B

andrew-evans | July 29, 2008 - 08:08

thanx for the comment. im glad i inspire you and i wil defiently keep on writing.

Mrs_Schechter | September 28, 2008 - 16:19

Awwwwwwww
This is really sweet Andy