'Meant to be'

A heartbeat,
pounding in my chest
and a second mirroring the first,
the rise and fall of a breath
filling my lungs with air,
shared in the same instant by you,
a locking of lips
speaking the words of the soul
and the fixation of eyes
showing the truths of it too,
a sensation of pure ecstacy
rushing through my veins
every moment I'm with you.
A feeling of belonging
when you hold me in your arms,
a feeling of 'meant to be'
when I hold you in mine.
Life has a purpose
and we were all
created for a reason,
and god put me here
to stay with you
for all of time.

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | April 18, 2011 - 20:03

Hi andrew-evans,

what a beautiful, romantic poem, full of love.
A very nice read.

Jenny.

insertponceyfre... | April 18, 2011 - 20:17

very romantic - I agree with Jenny.

You have some typos - most importantly it's meant, not ment, so you need to fix to title too. then ecstasy - and veins

andrew-evans | April 18, 2011 - 22:09

Thank you so much. I really enjoyed writing this. Thank you for pointing out the spelling errors, I didn't think meant looked right :P.

L G Meadows | April 20, 2011 - 09:04

Lovely proof that romance is not dead! Enjoyed reading it very much.