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Posted by andrew-evans on September 6, 2010 - 20:12

If you were given one wish
what would you wish for?
Some would try and cheat
and ask for more wishes,
some would ask for
infinate amounts of wealth,
some for strength
some for beauty,
those who are less selfish
ask for world peace,
no more wars
or weapons,
or maybe to end global warming.
I'll tell you what I'd wish for,
to be able to help
those who I care about
in their times of need.

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Comments

Highhat | September 7, 2010 - 08:17

Touching !
piaxx

skinner_jennifer | September 7, 2010 - 15:07

I would wish to be a better writer.
Good thought provoking poem.
Jenny.

andrew-evans | September 7, 2010 - 16:31

Thank you both very much

Beeme | September 7, 2010 - 19:48

I really like this Andrew, I think I'd wish for the same.

Beeme xx

andrew-evans | September 7, 2010 - 19:51

Thank you Beeme. Yeah, I hate the feeling of know someone i care about is in trouble, and there is nothing i can do to help

Beeme | September 7, 2010 - 20:03

Me too, I don't know why, (for me personally) I find it harder to help the people closest to me, even though I care about them the most.