Put aside

I like this Andrew, but I think there are a couple of typos:

line 1: do you mean shelf?

line 16: I think you mean now, instead of know (I bet you have the automatic spellcheck turned on) : )

okay thankyou i've corrected them now

I like it too.

Hi again andrew-evans,
you are a very strong writer, very earthy. I love the
way you express yourself. Also the way you don't use
complicated words, that are very expressive I know.
But sometimes complicated. You don't complicate your
poems.
Again very sad, but very thoughtful.
Jenny.

I like the simplistic feel to the writing, which only makes it more emotionally complex. The speaker can take on different personas, which I love and I imagined him as a child, speaking about his mother.

Hi andrew-evans,
join the club, I don't know many complicated words
either. I am studying the dictionary at the moment I have been studying it for two weeks now, I must admit
it does help me, I get so frustrated when I can't
think of the right words to describe what I am
trying to put over.
It's that mental block thing. Oh well.
Jenny.

Thank you all for the feedback, not something i'm used to. Jennifer, it's probably because i don't know that many complicated words that i don't put them in :). Maggy, thank you,i try to keep everything simple enough to understand, allowing the reader to see and feel the emotion behind the words. I actaully wrote it about being replaced by friends, but i can definatly see where you are coming from

Jennifer, i have the same problem, i just can't think of the right word, so i tend to waffle my way around it