Tear in her eye

Perfect in everyway,
beautiful in twice as many,
hair softer than silk
a smile as radiant as the sun,
eyes that catch every glance
and put me in a trance,
figure like a godess
and voice of an angel.

Yes perfect in everyway
except the tear in her eye

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Comments

Larkin Williamson | November 3, 2009 - 16:55

Nice work Andrew....Beautiful or ugly, rich or poor...a tear is a tear.

Cavalcaderl | November 26, 2009 - 14:38

new andrewEvans
Well done andrew
I agree with Larkin Williamson
Tears happiness joy sad hope
whatever, we all should
have a good cry releases tension.
julie x cavalcader (;-