The eye of the tiger
As sharp as a knife
As clever as he was
He still lost his life
The man was strong
He was one of a kind
He got what he wanted
Because of his mind
No ones untouchable
Thats what i would teach
It can always be done
Their just out of reach
I took his life
Because of such hate
You can't bring them back
Its always too late
I regret what I've done
cos i am going through hell
Locked up all alone
In this disturbed jail cell
Comments
pinda | November 29, 2009 - 12:09
Great dark feeling to this piece, well done. Made me check if all the windows and doors were locked lol.
In the third paragraph did you mean their in stead of there?
richielee70 | November 29, 2009 - 13:05
great again youmg angel , should be 'no' on third verse not ' know ' ! haha excelent poem tho , keep 'em coming
Lady-Bathsheba | November 29, 2009 - 13:08
Great descriptive piece Angel Well Done :)
angel-from-hell | November 29, 2009 - 13:10
thanks guys, i better sort them errors out lol
angel-from-hell | November 29, 2009 - 13:17
did you mean 'young' richielee70 or 'youmg' ? lol
Firebird | November 30, 2009 - 22:39
Like this, Angel :)