One-Six

convinced by envy
powered with fear
things are said
but there just not clear
a forming puzzle darkens my thoughts

One thought
Two thought
Three thought BAD!
Four thought
Five thought
Six thought MAD!

when the shadows lurk
they shiver my skin,
an deaths of doubt stay hidden within.

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Comments

Lady-Bathsheba | November 28, 2009 - 11:06

Very dark young man :) Dont listen to the demons :)

richielee70 | November 29, 2009 - 02:03

excellent work ,great flowing vivid images , what does your doctor think ? :)