Just 27 repetitions
And you can remember anything
Care to give an example?
Knowing someone's name is one...
And so why is it I,
Now, have memorised your name, so
Damn well? It confusing because,
Really I've only known you
Eleven seconds... and
Why is it my heart aches?
Perhaps it's the way your
Amusing voice
Replays your introduction in my head and that I
Know truthfully, somehow,
Eleven seconds have dissolved and in
Reality, I've loved you 27 repetitions long
Comments
sunshine | July 24, 2009 - 12:26
Nice, concise. Margot
ankari | July 29, 2009 - 20:34
thank you =)
ankari x
aitticboy | August 22, 2009 - 21:52
hehe i still have the orriginal of this somewhere :)
ankari | August 23, 2009 - 17:25
really? you kept it? haha, i'm glad, maybe you'll make money out of it some day? =)
ankari x
InspiredWriter | September 29, 2009 - 18:19
AH! I love your work and poems. You're amazing at this.
Thats a really sweet, short poem that...has an effect that not many people can master...=))
xxxxInspiredWriter
ankari | September 29, 2009 - 19:17
Thank you Sarah =) Much appreciated!
ankari x
maddie4848 | January 28, 2010 - 20:25
really like the way you manage to convey so much in a short space.. well done!!
ankari | January 28, 2010 - 20:35
thank you. condensing it all was an idea i wanted to experiment with and i'm glad it worked :)
ankari x