Weather torn and mangled,
escapism eludes her thought
as she slithers,
slithers back to his touch.
The aghast expression, the regional disclaimer,
desperate requests – ignored.
She’s wound up, pulsing.
No feelings restrained as she launches;
clinging to his warmth with scissored legs.
A sigh,
awesome relief,
a refreshing wave of gratitude
graces her; his stoic frame heavy
beneath her.
She embraces him, her whole body
entangling him, constricting.
He lies like a stone beneath her;
quiet, empty, vacant – a void.
Her fingers trace his outline, discovering
sites so often overlooked…stroking
the fire of her passion
as she tightens.
He’s a sinking rock
beneath her,
plummeting.

Comments
kheldar | March 24, 2010 - 23:27
Beautifully written and a great metaphor
Kheldar :--)
Mark Heathcote | March 25, 2010 - 01:36
Mark Heathcote
Loved this well written poem, great work!
lwilkinson | March 25, 2010 - 18:24
Gorgeous poem, haunting and suggestive. A well deserved cherry.
Nathan Bednarek | April 2, 2010 - 20:35
Beautiful. Poems like this usually tend to describe how a man 'explores' the woman whilst making love, so I like the unique tone that you created in this poem by switching the roles. Very effective. A well deserved cherry.
Nathan.