Eunectes Murinus


from the ABC set Concrete Decisions

Weather torn and mangled,
escapism eludes her thought
as she slithers,
slithers back to his touch.
The aghast expression, the regional disclaimer,
desperate requests – ignored.
She’s wound up, pulsing.

No feelings restrained as she launches;
clinging to his warmth with scissored legs.
A sigh,
awesome relief,
a refreshing wave of gratitude
graces her; his stoic frame heavy
beneath her.

She embraces him, her whole body
entangling him, constricting.
He lies like a stone beneath her;
quiet, empty, vacant – a void.
Her fingers trace his outline, discovering
sites so often overlooked…stroking
the fire of her passion
as she tightens.
He’s a sinking rock
beneath her,
plummeting.

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Comments

kheldar | March 24, 2010 - 23:27

Beautifully written and a great metaphor

Kheldar :--)

Mark Heathcote | March 25, 2010 - 01:36

Mark Heathcote
Loved this well written poem, great work!

lwilkinson | March 25, 2010 - 18:24

Gorgeous poem, haunting and suggestive. A well deserved cherry.

Nathan Bednarek | April 2, 2010 - 20:35

Beautiful. Poems like this usually tend to describe how a man 'explores' the woman whilst making love, so I like the unique tone that you created in this poem by switching the roles. Very effective. A well deserved cherry.

Nathan.