Brother
Do you see the poppies billow in the breeze?
On Flanders fields
The grounds where all your memories lie
Our leaders state the battle was won with jingoistic honour
"The deaths were many on the other side"
They tell us our trenches were filled to the brim
But with blood that would please
Yet I recognize their lie,
Considering the tragedy in which our family has so intimately been tied
You must know
I prayed for you every day my kinsman
Every time the clock would strike an hour
I would be at our table there kneeling
A child two years from the age of service...
And now a man
I remember
In these fields
Every one of these poppies took a drifting soul to grow
For every man stands a single flower
Now tell me
Really, was it worth it?
Did we truly gain a great amount of power?
A pound for every poppy sprouted?
The value of the conflict lately doubted
Leaving taste in our mouths all so sour
Brethren, our gains against the losses of our children and fathers couldn’t be counted even in our plentiful bags of flour
So now the poppies growing tall and strong
In the springs new birth
But not after long
The flowers wilt and bed the turf
Where all our brothers
Our father’s touched the hearth
Still yet we commemorate
Our patriot’s lives
But your life, brother did incinerate
By Rarcas Oscuro
Inspired by the war poem 'flanders fields' which can be seen at the link: http://www.greatwar.co.uk/poems/john-mccrae-in-flanders-fields.htm

Comments
Mangone | January 10, 2010 - 21:11
Hiya Anonyme
Before you deleted your poem it made me smile
and inspired the effort below.
Maybe if you combined bits of the two...
My Aspirin protégé
I feel I have to say
You're aspiring to less every day
Please take the pill today
my Aspirin protégé
When we go to bed
you act like you're dead
I want your head
but get Zzzed instead
no matter how i pray
my Aspirin protégé
Is the flavour fit to slay
you never let it stay...
no matter how i pray
Will there ever come a day
that we will find a way
my Aspirin protégé
My Dear Aspirin protégé
Please swallow it today
The pain might go away
Well, what do you say
My Aspirin protégé
Anonyme | January 11, 2010 - 13:43
Thank you for the idea Mangone but I decided to go for a different approach.
Read it, you may like it; I was going more for an elderly lover. More in love with the aspirin than an actual person. The poems more for fun. Sorry for stealing the good title.
Mangone | January 11, 2010 - 13:48
:o) I'll take a look now.
I liked the sentiment of your Flander's Field poem and I thought it might be nice to give people a link to what was probably your inspiration for it.
http://www.greatwar.co.uk/poems/john-mccrae-in-flanders-fields.htm
Lovely pic of poppies too.
Anonyme | January 11, 2010 - 13:52
Okay :)
And thank you, I should have done that. A good idea