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The Car Accident (Inspiration Point)

Posted by anshuman_sarkar on August 19, 2010 - 12:19
from the ABC set Mosaic

The car was racing at a high speed. It was moving downhill and I was enjoying. But suddenly I couldn’t negotiate a turn and broke through the side verge. I was falling down into the gorge. My heart was sinking and I could feel the pain. And with a thump I woke up. Thank GOD! It was just a dream.

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Comments

Highhat | August 19, 2010 - 13:34

very good.the ending is great ;)
pia xx

insertponceyfre... | August 19, 2010 - 17:07

I like the ending too - you managed to fit a lot of action into this

anshuman_sarkar | August 20, 2010 - 12:37

Thanks for your comment Pia.

anshuman_sarkar | August 20, 2010 - 12:39

I wrote it in one go...thanks insertponceyfre...for your comment.