Love Lingers Softly

Hey Another great read! Just a small piece of advice...would you perhaps consider altering the tense in the first little bit to keep with the general feel of the poem? You see, you could make it 'fingertips trace' instead of 'fingertips tracing' because for the ret of the poem you switch tenses,like 'breathe into my soul...' There are lot of things going on in this pem, though it is simple, and I really, really enjoyed that. Thanks! Natalia