Poem for woman at No.3

This is very cool. Seemingly subjective then makes increasing sense to tell a story with very few words. The four lines beginning 'We got existential' are great.

Thanks Dendrite. A true story that happened this very morning. I wonder if I'll ever see the woman from No.3 again...

Simple and elegant. I liked it a lot. Are you into existentialism? I like Camus.

Simple and elegant. I liked it a lot. Are you into existentialism? I like Camus.

I have to agree with dendrite, this is a very cool poem, clipped and confident, unfolding backwards so that the overall image stays with you long after reading the last line. Great poem, thanks!

Clever, telling the story backwards like an upside down pyramid- a moment becoming more distilled, more minute - the olive oil plumes making sense only on a reread. But a word of advice. Don't fry stuff in extra virgin unless you're a chef.