So The Pen Doesn't Work


from the ABC set Poems

So the pen doesn’t work
Cry me a river
So the pen doesn’t work
Does it look like I care
So the pen doesn’t work
That’s not my problem

Don’t come talking to me about your problems
Cause I’m too young to care
As you said before
All I want is my money

So the pen doesn’t work
So fix it
So the pen doesn’t work
I don’t care

Fix it yourself!

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Comments

Beeme | June 4, 2010 - 21:38

Very emotive, I could feel the emotion in this one. I think the repetition works very effectively.

Beeme xx