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Posted by Beeme on April 16, 2011 - 12:49

My body;
an archive.
Photographs
attatched to bone;
like polarised
memories.
Luminous
with a light,
I have never seen.
A glowing example
for you.

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Silver Spun Sand | April 16, 2011 - 13:07

Many congratulations, Beeme, and I hope you have a wonderful day, despite your course work;)

Your poem is beautiful, and an apt way to celebrate your birthday. It sure does sparkle;-)

Tina

insertponceyfre... | April 16, 2011 - 13:56

I love the poem Beeme - especially the first six lines, and a big happy birthday too. I hope you have a really wonderful day! xx

skinner_jennifer | April 16, 2011 - 14:56

Hi Beeme,

I thought this was a very clever little poem, very
original, I like the idea of:-

My body;
an archive.
Photographs
attached to bone;
like polarised
memories.
Luminous
with a light
I have never seen.

What a brilliant description.

And a "Very Happy Birthday" to you!

Jenny.

maggyvaneijk | April 16, 2011 - 22:22

Happy Birthday you fantastic poet! Good luck with the work load.

Beeme | April 17, 2011 - 19:07

Thank you very much Tina, Insert, jenny and Maggy! your birthday messages are lovely and i'm really happy you enjoyed the poem :)

Beeme xxx