Pictures flickering over skin

Face turned away from light
her head hangs low
cradled inside her hands,
like a dropping snow-drop
as if she'd fall apart without support.

Her resting body finds it hard to breathe
the little black dress is too tight;
she reaches for another hand,
gracing the air like a darting dragonfly
then hovers and returns to her side.

The blur of life- a cinematographic film
rising from the nights sky,
screening in the bright glow of her yolk white eyes.
Which turn over and over;
hysteric at watching her ghost-twin dance her life again.

There's no air of upper class here
the smell of sweat and grass fills the blank space,
her body framed by a powdery snow of light.
Sitting like the rim of an iced pond
around her nostrils.
A fanlight of coloured glass above her door
projects distorted shadows,
people out back in the parking lot
that don't feel drunk enough yet.
Spilt red wine like a royal carpet
leading somewhere.

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Comments

Highhat | February 20, 2011 - 15:23

A lot of great imagery here Beeme. I like it
;)Pia

SundaysChild | February 20, 2011 - 20:12

I agree.

Beeme | February 20, 2011 - 20:42

Thank you very much Pia and SundaysChild :) xx

rjnewlyn | February 21, 2011 - 00:11

Certainly has a sort of delirious intensity about it. Powerful stuff! Rob

Beeme | February 21, 2011 - 10:25

Thanks Rob

Beeme xx

ScoZen | February 21, 2011 - 12:11

Nice one Beeme.
I enjoyed all of it.
Regards

Beeme | February 21, 2011 - 12:19

Thank you Scozen :)

Beeme xx

shoe | February 21, 2011 - 13:18

She sounds like a very tragic figure, Vivid images and you use the word 'cinematographic' which suits it perfectly.

Beeme | February 21, 2011 - 13:23

Yes she is...thank you very much Shoe for reading and for your lovely comment.

Beeme xx

jonahs cough | February 21, 2011 - 14:20

this is lovely. very vivid and alive. thanks beeme

Beeme | February 21, 2011 - 22:38

Thank you Jonah, glad you thought so and enjoyed this.

Beeme xx