Darkness

'This room is stagnant-
but hope comes and goes,
shines but fades like snowflakes.
Casting shadows against the wall,
she fears the darkness
and when the light shines;
she gathers her body up- a human blind,'

- how gorgeous is that?! And '...gathers her body up- a human blind' - just brilliant :)

Really, really enjoyed this, Beeme - so beautiful.

Rachel xx

wow, thank you so much Rachel :) I'm so happy you enjoyed this so much. It means alot :-)

Beeme xx

"the rain outside finds its own root,"
poignant line and and a poignant poem- I enjoyed it and it is true to your style Beeme- well done

;)Pia

I agree with blighter's Beeme...imagery is spot on;-) Well done.

Tina xx

Thank you so much Highhat, Blighters and Tina. I'm so happy you liked the images :)

Beeme xx

Those first four lines really draw the reader in, and it's so haunting and lovely!

yes, this is really excellent. I lean towards dark poetry and song so this strikes a chord with me.

Thank you so much Shoe and Cormacru999, :)

Beeme xx

Great stuff beeme. :-)

"the rain outside finds its own root" - love this line! Well done on the cherry :)

Magic xxx

Thank you very much Fatboy and Magic :)

Beeme xx