Enlightened

I
Daylight stains…
your ghost-white scent;
pressing against my skin.

II
The light of day
shines through you;
I’ve never seen anything like it.
A white wound
expanding…
weighing me down,
a cast away match
setting my skin alight.

III
You turn away;
your back a black silhouette;
curved like a quotation mark.
Curling...
around my body;
engraving...
“whatever gives light
must also endure burning”
across my skin
with match-finger tips.

IV
I breathe in water;
let it ripple across my skin.
Blessed in flesh;
shining gold;
drowning in light.
My body-
a fleshy lighthouse;
enlightened.
An object of hope,
half overshadowed.

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Comments

MistakenMagic | April 10, 2011 - 23:35

'You turn away;
your back a black silhouette;
curved like a quotation mark.'

- love these lines, Beeme. This is another brilliant set of images, well done ;)

Magic xxx

insertponceyfre... | April 11, 2011 - 07:13

I really like number 3 Beeme. In the second, it's cast away.

seashore | April 11, 2011 - 08:02

Number 3 my favourite also.

fatboy74 | April 11, 2011 - 11:10

Very good Beeme. :-)

Beeme | April 11, 2011 - 11:39

Thank you Magic, Insert, Seashore, and Fatboy. I've very glad you enjoyed :)

Beeme xx

SundaysChild | April 11, 2011 - 16:47

Fascinating imagery here Beeme, well done xx

Beeme | April 11, 2011 - 20:13

thank you :D xxx