Life Line

Everyday you seem to be making a step towards good and deep poetry. A landmark poem this is. Congratulations. You have a poet's sensitivity, which is all you need. (Perhaps absorbed instead of digested?)

Thank you for your kind words artisus. I'm glad you enjoyed. I think absorbed works better :). Thanks again. Beeme xx

The last lines are wonderful and such an original image. I think we're all desperate to keep our balance - I guess the trick is not to look down ;)

Magic xxx

glad i read this again -it is a great poem Bemee, super :)

Well done on the cherry Beeme!!!

Magic xxx

Beautiful poem beeme. A very well deserved cherry:)
sarah x

Thank you for your kind words Magic, Sarah and littleditty :) x Glad you all enjoyed. Beeme xx

Thanks for the cherry ABCtales!! x

New Beeme
Well done on the cherry congratulations
It's very true to life everyday.
Glad your back.
julie x cavalcader

Thank you Julie, it's great to hear from you.
Beeme xx

A beautiful poem, well constructed, great imagery.
ankari x

Thank you ankari, glad you enjoyed x

"Beauty walks a razor's edge, someday I'll make her mine