Dance with me

Very nice Beeme. I am intrigued how you have used dance to define love.
RL Murdoch

Thanks RL Murdoch,Glad you enjoyed and thanks for thinking up this weeks inspiration point.

Best Wishes,
Beeme.

Last Thursday I sent Tony the phrase for inspiration point then I had the idea for "Come Dance With Me" which I posted Friday. See what you think of it when you get time?
Thanks
RL Murdoch

I just went and read "Come Dance With Me". I think personally that it is excellent, the continuous use of the phrase, makes your writing come alive. You use so many lovely images at the pond, I liked the dragonfly dipping in to quench its thirst. It was a great read, very mesmerizing. Great work.

Beeme

Thanks.
My youngest daughter read it and said she found it very soothing. Very different from the one about Depression.

RL Murdoch

And it's inspired me to have a go at the IP. Lovely Beeme. Sarah x

And it's inspired me to have a go at the IP. Lovely Beeme. Sarah x

ha! ha! Thank you and I'm glad, looking forward to reading it. x

I went to a dance school once I wasn’t a success story haha!

I went to one ballet lesson when I was younger and never went back, they were very snobish haha!

Those guys relieved me of a lot of cash but I must admit the teachers were very sexy. There were competitions, and exams too. They didn’t mind me around but I got only one compliment ever “good heels!”

“I move towards you,
bringing my feet on tip-toes,
following your beats.“
“I advance faster,
move into the centre now,
come and dance with me.“

Your poem sounds like a Rumba. It’s a very passionate dance- provided you can actually dance. Ja so that was the dance “club”. Should rather have bought a car on hp my chances would have been better. Though in that case, I guess it was a blessing in disguise.

Cheers! Nolan
(A fool and his money are parted sooner or later).