Searching

Hello Beeme.
Charming.
I see this most mornings when I wake up.

"...break of day white lights smudge the horizon..."

I'm sure you will find that elusive person when the tide turns in your favour.
Regards.

Hi ScoZen, I'm really glad you enjoyed. I hope the tides do just that, thanks very much again :)

Beeme xx

You have a very distinctive style, Beeme - it's very appealing. This is another good piece.

Thank you so much seashore :D Glad you enjoyed

Beeme xx

Dark blue
break of day
white lights
smudge the
horizon

Love these lines. Really good poem. xx

Thank you very much SundaysChild :D Glad you enjoyed.

Beeme xx

Enchanting imagery, I love the minute boat Sun skimming the surface of air.

Thank you so much Shoe, glad you enjoyed :) I think that's my favourite part too :)

Beeme xx

Nice piece but I suspect you mean 'gripping' not 'griping'.

Thank you very much Tony and yeah I do :)

Beeme

Ah - that's better. Cherry duly awarded!

new Beeme
Really lovely lines
stanza
Searching
gripping
the changing
tides
for any
sign of
you
congrats:
the cherry!
Hope the tides turn for you.
julie xx

Thank you very much Tony!

Beeme

aww thank you Julie, much appreciated :-)

Beeme xx

Lovely, fluid and clear.
Geertje

Thank you very much :)

Beeme xx

ah wow Beeme ii very liking your recent ones! K xx

Thank you very much Kahdai, your praise means a lot :)

Beeme xx