Shocks 1,2,3

I really love this poem, I can feel your emotions in this one, i really like reading your work becuase it inspires me to do some more of my own,

love Lennie x

Thankyou Lennie, im glad you enjoy my work (:

I quite enjoyed the surreal couplet,

'The only secretary is that
I can write all that I feel.'

Thankyou Ewan , im glad you enjoyed it.

Beeme

Beeme,first time I commented on your work and must admit I think your a great writer. Only recently noticed you,not that I think your rubbish.It's I tend to look at writers work,who I know on this site(If you know what I mean).So I been keeping a eye out for your work.Once I read the doors of the angel,Enough go eat your own skin and this.I had to comment.
Your a master with words and you got talent!..I'm officially a regular viewer of your work now. Expect a comment on every peice of yours I see

:)

Peace x

P.s. The only secretary is that
I can write all that I feel.
My hands can just about
support broken emotion
and tears only wet the paper
and blur some words,
Added defect

That is true man,I can relate to that sometimes

Thats really great, I have commented on afew of your work and I regulary check your uploads.I really enjoy your work (: Im really pleased that you have enjoyed my work; cos thats what it's all about. (a master of words, what a great compliment !!) Much appreciated Beeme xx

And yes many times I feel like, my poetry out weighs my emotions lol

well, beeme, you have certainly continued your evolution as a poet. this piece is emotionally raw and powerful. a very good read.
good job

jason

Thankyou Jason, im glad you enjoyed my work.

Beeme