Street lights

great detail. love it. very urban/modern.

cheers,

jose.

Wow, thank you very much Jose. I'm very glad you ejoyed!

Beeme xx

You have a really clever knack Beeme of finishing poems on just the right note. Very much enjoyed. :-)

new Beeme
Hi! yes. I agree with fatboy74
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julie xx

You are such a `natural' Beeme. Where does your imagery come from I wonder? I particularly like the last two stanzas. xx

Thank you fatboy, means a lot especially as I found this ending quite tricky :-]

Beeme xx

Thank you Julie. Very happy you enjoyed! :]

Beeme xx

awwh thank you so much seashore, I'm not too sure. This poem was inspired by a scene in the film 'proof'. Very glad you enjoyed :-]

Beeme xx

Hi Beeme,

wonderful descriptive poem, really enjoyed.

Thanks Jenny.

Love the feel to this, and the endings nice, but maybe a bit too soon? :p x

Thank you so much Jenny, I'm very glad you enjoyed :]

Beeme xx

Thank you Lynze... perhaps :-] I might do a follow up piece :]

Beeme xx

Neatly done.

Thank you Sunday :-]

Beeme xx

blur their faces
like melting
candle wax

great imagery!

Thank you! :]

Beeme xx

ooh such a great writer, am put right in this one xxx K

aww thank you so much Kahdai! xxx