I don't understand
how the message
gets through to
the bones in
your hands,
the blood
pulsing through
your arms,
mapping-out
the course
of survival,
'you'll be alright'
drying on the
curve of your wrist,
violet bruises
descend down
your arm,
his henna blue-prints;
afraid of
loosing control,
the numb antibiotics-
God-like in their case
of miracle cures,
looking at each day
as if it was the last.
Comments
awsamy | June 18, 2011 - 19:17
this was a really nice read :) great imagery a lil darker than what i would post ;p but its really lovely :) im glad writers block is going away! :D xx
Beeme | June 18, 2011 - 19:22
aha you know me! Thank I'm happy you enjoyed :) And fingers crossed this is the begining of more writing soon :)
Beeme xxx
Highhat | June 18, 2011 - 20:16
A fine return from your writer's block Beeme.
;)Pia
seashore | June 18, 2011 - 20:30
No evidence of a block in this one Beeme!
Beeme | June 18, 2011 - 20:53
Thanks so, so much Pia and Seashore! Your comments have raised my spirits and confidence. Thanks again :)
Beeme xx
SundaysChild | June 18, 2011 - 20:57
I agree with what has been said here already Beeme- very good, keep it up :)
Beeme | June 18, 2011 - 21:11
Thanks very much SundaysChild! :)
Beeme xx
Cavalcaderl | June 19, 2011 - 07:46
New Beeme
Lovely to see your writing again.
Wondered where you were. Write something
you have done a bit funny maybe help you.
Your very gifted, like reading your's and all.
Mine is always going in and out same room. and computer he got and linked all up, for me is sitting on the table connectected,and I share the damn computer, when he is off it. I get blocks to, but read other's great work's AbcTaler's on here helps.
Now he is re-tired, so different, through his health.
But plays Snooker Capt; and bowls, just goes! So I now do my things now.
Have a nice week-end. You know you can write.
Hope your well and studies.
julie xx
Silver Spun Sand | June 19, 2011 - 08:09
I agree with all that has been said, Beeme. Your block has unblocked...so to speak, and very eloquently at that;-)
Tina xx
Beeme | June 19, 2011 - 09:50
Thank you very much Julie!! I'm very well thank you and I've just finished my last exam last thursday. Now I'm waiting on my results to decide if I can get into uni or college. I hoep your well xx
Beeme | June 19, 2011 - 10:09
Thanks Tina, I'm not entirely happy with this. But I'm thank full I've managed to write something. I'm glad you liked this one though :)
Beeme xx