You don't need to think about me,
but I always will remember you.
I wear your favourite shade of lipstick.
I remember you told me, I think for the
first time, that I was beautiful.
I think for the first time you noticed
that I would change every part of me,
to your ideal.
You don't need to hear the three words
that will change nothing,
but I need to say them.
I need to remember the times when we were
happy,
so I am not haunted by our mistakes.
I remember the day you left,
and I don't think that I will ever forget.
I should try to remember that I am
insignificant to you,
but that thought hurts to much.
Comments
MistakenMagic | December 2, 2009 - 22:56
Really love this re-edit Beeme. I'm not usually a fan of poetry that's not stuffed full of imagery but this really works. It's raw and it's brilliant ;)
Magic xxx
Beeme | December 3, 2009 - 15:16
Thankyou so much Magic, your comment made me smile.
Beeme xx
SundaysChild | December 3, 2009 - 20:11
This is really good.
Keep it up. xx
Beeme | December 3, 2009 - 21:01
Thankyou so much SundaysChild! :) xx
Larkin Williamson | December 3, 2009 - 21:42
Wonderful again Beeme! :)
Beeme | December 4, 2009 - 07:51
Thankyou Larkin, all these lovely comments are greatly encouraging. I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Beeme xx
Cavalcaderl | December 4, 2009 - 21:49
new Beeme
Really beautiful, and flowing
in all direction's.Very expressive
for love to.
Hope your well.
I think! I can't get through the door!
with all these wonderful compliment's from
all of you, in all adversity.
thank's a million, and to Silver-Spun-Sand.
love julie xx
Beeme | December 4, 2009 - 22:27
Thankyou Julie, glad you enjoyed. Your welcome for my comments all completely true :)
Beeme xx