I went in search of a maiden fair
And saw a vision standing there
But I knew as I held her in my stare
For me to have a future with her
I should be twenty years younger
And her standards much lower
I went in search of a maiden fair
And saw a vision standing there
But I knew as I held her in my stare
For me to have a future with her
I should be twenty years younger
And her standards much lower
Comments
skinner_jennifer | August 11, 2010 - 08:32
Hi Biggus,
Interesting poem.
Jenny.
Biggus | August 11, 2010 - 13:09
Thanks Jenny
BTW if you like Angels you might want to read these two stories
http://www.abctales.com/story/biggus/snow-angels
http://www.abctales.com/story/biggus/angels-mons-and-le-cateau
skinner_jennifer | August 11, 2010 - 19:31
Hi Biggus,
I have just finished reading the Snow Angels.
What a beautiful story. It's one of those miracles,
that you can't explain. But you did so well.
Jenny.
Biggus | August 11, 2010 - 21:52
Thanks Jenny