AIMING TO HIGH


from the ABC set RELATIONSHIPS

I went in search of a maiden fair
And saw a vision standing there
But I knew as I held her in my stare
For me to have a future with her
I should be twenty years younger
And her standards much lower

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | August 11, 2010 - 08:32

Hi Biggus,
Interesting poem.
Jenny.

Biggus | August 11, 2010 - 13:09

Thanks Jenny

BTW if you like Angels you might want to read these two stories

http://www.abctales.com/story/biggus/snow-angels

http://www.abctales.com/story/biggus/angels-mons-and-le-cateau

skinner_jennifer | August 11, 2010 - 19:31

Hi Biggus,
I have just finished reading the Snow Angels.
What a beautiful story. It's one of those miracles,
that you can't explain. But you did so well.
Jenny.

Biggus | August 11, 2010 - 21:52

Thanks Jenny