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BREATH OF SPRING

Posted by Biggus on August 10, 2009 - 08:23
from the ABC set ROMANTICALLY INCLINED TALES - ADMIRATION AND LUST

She Entered
Like a breath of spring
And her presence
Altered everything
She walked in
With such a delicate air
Heads turned
To watch the maiden fair
She then returned
From whence she came
But didn’t leave us
Quite the same
We hoped to see again
That breath of spring
Whose presence
Altered everything

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Comments

smilingleo | August 10, 2009 - 08:38

A very sweet poem depicting your emotions.....nice.

Biggus | August 10, 2009 - 08:49

Thank you

scoot | August 10, 2009 - 11:42

I love it, it is so light, even though it's rhymed. The rhyme adds something, rather than just being a stilted form.
Nice.
Karen

Biggus | August 10, 2009 - 12:30

Thank you Karen you are very kind

Paul