Dance for me that dance
The one of ancient rhythm
Dance it to my whim
Like a primordial organism
Dance for me that dance
Laid back like the limbo
Hips grinding and gyrating
With your legs akimbo
Dance for me that dance
Dance it like a beast
Feel the animal rhythm
Feel the sensual beat
Sing for me that song
The one of ancient language
Guttural and savage
Like a beast in a cage
Dance for me that dance
Dance it to my rhythm
And as the music ends
Sing to me your orgasm
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | July 31, 2009 - 10:19
Liked this one...a lot.
Tina
Biggus | July 31, 2009 - 10:45
Thank you Tina, glad you ebjoyed it.
Your comments are always appreciated.
Paul
sunshine | July 31, 2009 - 14:48
Ignoring for a moment the fact that this is labelled erotica, there are some beautiful phrases which to me would put it another category. The repetition of :'Dance for me that dance' has lovely echoes of yearning. Margot
Biggus | July 31, 2009 - 15:37
Thanks Margo, which category would you suggest?
Paul
sunshine | July 31, 2009 - 16:25
I think it's got it's feet in two camps: erotica and romance. Margot