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THE DAWN OF DREAMS

Posted by Biggus on February 8, 2012 - 13:03
from the ABC set ROMANTICALLY INCLINED TALES - DREAM LOVE

Heralding the dawn,
The first fingers of light
Steal in through the glass
Penetrating the gloom
Waking me from my slumber
And stirring me from my dreams
Which but a moment ago
Were vividly real and tangible
Yet now are only half remembered things
Drifting away like mist on the breeze

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skinner_jennifer | February 8, 2012 - 16:32

Hi Paul,

I knew you could do it once again, this is
so much how I wake from dreams to a new day.

Congratulations on those well deserved cherries,
I'm so pleased for you.

Beautiful poem.

Jenny.

Biggus | February 8, 2012 - 18:42

thank you jenny you are very kind

Stan | February 8, 2012 - 19:01

Good one, mate. Well done on the fruit.

Biggus | February 8, 2012 - 20:27

cheers Stan, it seems cherries are like buses you don't see one for ages then two come at once

Cavalcaderl | February 9, 2012 - 09:43

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Biggus | February 9, 2012 - 10:19

Thanks

steve_elliott04 | February 9, 2012 - 17:11

Brilliant!

'Heralding the dawn,
The first fingers of light'

This i genius, i really love it. Such a strong image, so perfectly portrayed.
Very nicely done!

S.

Biggus | February 9, 2012 - 17:17

Thanks Steve