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Posted by Biggus on October 1, 2010 - 10:27
from the ABC set SENIOR MOMENTS

I used to rise at dawn
And marvel at my erection
Such a thing of beauty
So wonderful in its perfection
But those days are behind me
Its flaccid now upon inspection
And to raise it from its flaccidity
I must consume some blue confection
And thus perform a miracle rising
Akin to the resurrection

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Nolan | October 1, 2010 - 11:07

Try and be a bit more subtle.

Biggus | October 1, 2010 - 11:41

I dont do subtle

Nolan | October 1, 2010 - 13:08

Call a spade a bloody shovel.

Margharita | October 1, 2010 - 14:48

So, now, presuming your chosen name owes its provenance to Monty Python, are you going to have to change it? Given the change in circumstances.

Don't start doing subtle. It would confuse me.

Nolan | October 1, 2010 - 15:11

I can imagine.

Biggus | October 1, 2010 - 15:39

Thanks Margaharita, What would you suggest Limpus or Flacidus.
Paul

Margharita | October 1, 2010 - 15:45

Droopy. As in dwarf. Or not, presumably, after your little blue pill.

Eee. I do like a Friday afternoon giggle.

Biggus | October 1, 2010 - 15:51

Maybe "Resting" like an out of work actor or perhaps "Off duty" or "At ease" like a soldier no longer having to be at attension.
All though Droopy seems appropriate.