ELAINE


from the ABC set ROMANTICALLY INCLINED TALES - LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

I remember the first time
That I saw Elaine
Just one look
And I was smitten
But I couldn’t speak to her
I just watched
And admired
She caught me looking
Once or twice
And she smiled
Her smile was nice
But I looked away embarrassed
The last time she suddenly got up
And to my utter dismay
She was coming my way
I thought she would have a go
About me staring
But no she said “hello”
And told me her name
Then for the longest time
She just looked at me
As I stuttered and stammered
Then she kissed me

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Comments

vidit.chopra | June 15, 2011 - 10:17

Love at first sight indeed.
'I though she would have a go'
It should be thought rather than though I guess.
Good one.
Vidit
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Biggus | June 15, 2011 - 10:41

Thanks Vidit, I have corrected the spelling now
Paul

skinner_jennifer | June 15, 2011 - 11:01

This is a beautiful and romantic.

Jenny.

Biggus | June 15, 2011 - 11:43

Thanks Jenny