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I SPEND ALL OF MY DAYS MISSING YOU

Posted by Biggus on May 15, 2011 - 07:43
from the ABC set ROMANTICALLY INCLINED TALES - LOST LOVE

I spend all of my days missing you
And at night I dream of kissing you
And I just wanted to let you know
That I just can’t seem to let you go
If you called to me and beckoned
I would take you back in a second

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oldpesky | May 15, 2011 - 07:56

Morning Biggus. I feel your pain. Should 'beaconed' be beckoned?

Mummy Penguin | May 15, 2011 - 18:08

I like this. I see OP has suggested a change which I agree with but I rather like the notion of a flaming beacon to act as a signal to return.

MP

Biggus | May 15, 2011 - 18:42

Thanks Pesky and point taken, i cant beleive I missed that

Biggus | May 15, 2011 - 18:42

Thanks MP.
I like that notion too

maisie | May 15, 2011 - 20:13

i love the rythmn and pace in your short poems.

Nolan | May 20, 2011 - 21:50

I know what it's like Paul. Cheer up!

Biggus | May 25, 2011 - 07:50

Thanks Maisie

Biggus | May 25, 2011 - 07:51

Thanks Nolan