I WALK ON EGGS


from the ABC set ROMANTICALLY INCLINED TALES - BAD LOVE

I walk on eggs
To protect the fragile peace
I try to be invisible
As I dread your displeasure so
But even in the midst
Of such an uneasy peace
I fear your rejection
For being invisible is still better
Than not being there at all

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Comments

insertponceyfre... | July 6, 2011 - 08:29

i really like this one

Biggus | July 6, 2011 - 08:59

Thank you

Highhat | July 6, 2011 - 12:58

well deserved cherries

Biggus | July 6, 2011 - 13:05

Thanks Pia, I was beginning to think they were out of season

Cavalcaderl | July 6, 2011 - 15:51

new Biggus
Yes, I enjoyed poem.
And desrved cherry!
julie x

Biggus | July 6, 2011 - 19:57

Thanks Julie

Biggus | July 7, 2011 - 07:26

I might take you up on that I'm in Old Woking.

Thanks
Paul

SundaysChild | July 7, 2011 - 09:25

Much enjoyed Biggus

Biggus | July 7, 2011 - 12:47

Thank you, glad you enjoyed