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IMPRUDENT HEART

Posted by Biggus on November 4, 2009 - 09:27
from the ABC set ROMANTICALLY INCLINED TALES - VARIOUS

She fell in love
Too easily
Too deeply
Too desperately
Her heart was imprudent
Indiscrete, Impulsive
There was always another target
Of her affections
Some would deplore her
Some would ignore her
Some would use her
Some would abuse her
Her heart was always disrespected
Always unappreciated
Her love was always unwanted
And always unrequited
She just wanted to be happy
But each time
She strove for love
It just got further away
She gave her heart
Too readily
Too easily
Too cheaply

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Comments

tarashannon | November 4, 2009 - 16:55

Hi, I think your stuff is great. Every time I've been on here since I joined I've noticed your username too. Probably because you live in the UK! I wouldn't be surprised if they used some of your poems for GCSE analysis too.

Biggus | November 4, 2009 - 22:11

Thanks Tara very much appreciated, and you are right about the GCSE analysis as well.